Wow, that was a loooonngg time coming. I know I promised that it'd be up a couple weeks ago, and I had about half of it done. But then procrastination came, and I didn't finish it. It was kinda complicated, and I only finished the last 1/3 last night, so be grateful it's here at all ;)
Willow
stared at the candle flickering in her window. It was almost completely
dark, and the single candle's flame was the only light in the dark grey
stone turret room.
She sighed deeply. My help comes from the Author, and he alone, she thought, trying to muster her courage.She pretended to be cheerful, but deep inside, fear gnawed at her stomach. What if none of this worked? What if she ended up actually being dragged to that horrible Lorthin place and being tortured to give up her Author-given ring. She had a responsibility for it. She was not to let anyone, absolutely anyone put it on.
Glancing down to look at the golden ring shining on her right ring finger, the elvish script on it lit up briefly, as if to remind her of her faith and calling. Right.
"Move girl!" a burly guard demanded, elbowing Aliatha out of his way as he thumped into the room.
"Excuse me!" she sputtered indignantly.
Teclemith backed up to the wall, but there was nowhere to run as the burly guy grabbed him by the arm in an iron grip. "Come on, Rebel. You're goin' to see Tash tonight."
Teclemith backed up to the wall, but there was nowhere to run as the burly guy grabbed him by the arm in an iron grip. "Come on, Rebel. You're goin' to see Tash tonight."
"Now," the at-least-seven-feet-tall Tash thundered
down at petite little Willow. "Give me your ring, girl, and your life
and limbs will be spared."
What a lovely way of putting things, Shadow scum, she
mentally retorted. Stubbornly she shook her head, clutching her right
hand against her chest, her fingers curled into a fist. No way she was
giving that ring up. No way.
Tash then turned and gave Tashmath a slight nod, who
nodded to a guard at the door. The guard in turn jerked open the ornate
door. And in tromped a big-burly-mountain-man guard dragging Teclemith. This can't be good.
"Well than," Tash sniffed. "I suppose this youth will have to pay a price. Bring him up here," he ordered.
Teclemith tried to resist, but the huge guard practically carried him up the plushly carpeted steps.
"No!" Willow burst out, her mind racing.
"Well then?" Tash's cruel long-fingered black-clad hand hovered before her. "Your choice is before you. Make it."
Her decision made, Willow glared into his masked face. "I've made it."
Tajoreth, trying to be discreet, unlatched the large window and pushed
it open as hard as he could. The wind whistled loudly as it wooshed
through. All of the candles were out in an instead, plunging the vast
ballroom into pitch-blackness.
For a split-second, there was complete and utter silence.
Then Tashmath started shouting, Zemerah started shrieking, and Tajoreth
{to add to the commotion} started yelling.
Tajoreth felt
someone grab his arm, and then another, smaller hand grab his other
arm. Silently, he guided those hands to the windowsill. He heard the
rustling of feathers {Willow's creepy dress} and the creaking of wood as
they climbed hand over hand down the trellis.
Teclemith waited impatiently as Willow ducked behind a
shed to change. He could hear her muttering to herself about the
idiocracy of the dress. And the sound of fabric being sliced by a
dagger. She wasn't a patient one.
"I'm done," she whispered, appearing about a minute later,
now clothed in dark brown trousers and a dark blue tunic, her long hair
twisted neatly up into a bun.
"Lovely. I thought you
had up and left me here standing in the dark," he grinned, breaking into
a jog as they made their way down to the stables. The immense windows
of the ballroom above them were still dark, so it was obvious they
hadn't been discovered yet.
"This way," he pointed down a worn footpath to their left. "That's the servant's path. It will get us there quicker, if we hurry."
"This way," he pointed down a worn footpath to their left. "That's the servant's path. It will get us there quicker, if we hurry."
"They're gone!" cried the big burly guard that had been holding
Teclemith. When Teclemith had wrenched free, he'd hollered, but no one
had heard him.
"Blast it!" muttered Kedemeth. He glanced at his elder
sister Zemerah, who was staring at the open window. She nodded slightly
at him, than at the window.
"Go," was all she said.
Kedemeth couldn't even hear her, but he read her lips. He nodded. He
knew exactly where the duo would head.
"Hurry!" Teclemith called softly over his shoulder as
they raced towards the stables. Willow nodded, but didn't call back
because she was saving her breath. He disappeared into the stables as
she leaned against the doorway and panted. Stupid long path to the
stables.
"Halt!" a male voice interrupted her thoughts. Willow
whirled around, her hand on her elven dagger. Kedemeth was about thirty
feet away on the path, holding a sword pressed against Aliatha's throat.
Her terrified face was frozen with fear.
"Do not call out or she dies," Kedemeth ordered. "Put down your sword."
Willow nodded slowly and lifted her dagger from it's sheath and dropped it to the damp grass.
"Now-" Before he could finish his sentence, a sword
appeared out of nowhere and hit Kedemeth on the back of the head with
the flat. Crumpling to the ground, Kedemeth let go of Aliatha, who's
knees buckled. But the sword-bearer reached in and caught her. Tajoreth
stepped into the torchlight and half-carried Aliatha to the horse that
Teclemith was leading out.
"Thanks Tajoreth," Willow grinned, grabbing Aliatha's other arm to steady her.
"I am all right," Aliatha assured her shakily. "I will fetch
Shadowlight. Thank you, Tajoreth." She threw him a grateful smile. He
smiled back.
"Let's go, guys," Willow directed as Aliatha led Shadowlight into the puddle of torchlight.
"Come, Shadowlight. Quickly now, we musn't be caught," Aliatha
whispered. She slid her foot into the stirrup and swung her leg over the
saddle. Willow grabbed her offered hand and pulled herself easily into
the saddle.
"Thank you again. Friend," Willow gave him a playful salute as Aliatha dug her heels into her mare's sides.
"You are welcome. Friend...." he waved as they galloped off into the dark night.Whew! That was longer than I usually write. I hope you liked it. I like it, even if no one else does ;)
By the way, I still haven't named the character from my last post, so if you still have ideas, you can hustle over there and comment.
If you have any questions, of course, feel free to ask.
-Be a friend, not an enemy-
~Willow
Willow, this is brilliantly written, full of positive descriptions and tremendous scenes described! I can't wait until next Friday!!!
ReplyDeleteSurfs: Thank you sooo much!
DeleteI loved it Willow!!!!
ReplyDeleteI have a question though. When does D make her appearance? I don't mind if you tell me that I have to wait or anything but will it be soon or a few chapters away or what?
Hi Mary B!
DeleteD makes her appearance reasonably soon, I'm still debating hen she should come in. You'll know exactly when she comes in thought. She comes in with a bang {in more ways than one!}.
Brava!!! I enjoy every chapter of Friends as much as the last, but this time, you have out-done yourself x) Keep it comin'!!
ReplyDeleteThanks so much, Margaret!
DeleteI loved it! (I always do, but anyway) Can't wait the next Chapter.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Rebekah! What did you like about it?
DeleteLoved it! (I always do, but, anyway) Can't wait for the next chapter.
ReplyDeleteIt was so good, Willow! I need to figure out my own escape scene...
ReplyDeleteDo you make up all your own names?
~IS
Thank Iolani! Escape scenes {at least for me} are kinda challenging, that's why this one took an eternity and a half ;) Actually, for names, I found some in the Bible. For example, Kadesh = Kadesh Barnea. I believe Shemesh was in there somewhere too. Hyaline was actually from a Narnia book. But I came up with most of them myself.
DeleteThat's cool; mostly I look up medieval-ish names online, especially for characters, because I find when I make mine up they all sound like girl's names. So I look up boys names a lot. But I made up all the names of my countries, cities, and other things on my blog. That's really cool about Kadesh, Shemesh, and Hyaline! Which Narnia book is she from? I named a city in one of my countries Lystra, forgetting it was a city in the Bible, and then remembered later!
ReplyDeleteIn the Horse and His Boy {my favorite Narnia book} her name comes from the ship that the Narnian's take to and from Tashbaan, the Splendor Hyaleen. I just changed the spelling. And that's pretty cool, I really like the name Lystra. I may have to use it, if you don't mind?
Deletethe pace + mood + drama is brilliantly written; and might i add how proud i am of tajoreth? because i am indeed. oh, i just adore aliatha; she's such a charismatic darling! willow's integrity is one of the things i love most about her; in that respect, she has a deal of qualities which, i think, make her a true heroine. <3
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Les! I try to make Willow who I want to be when I mature into adulthood, as she is just on the cusp of it.
DeleteDarrion, I got your comment. You also have a point about the Kili/Tauriel "thing". I don't like when people call it that either. It makes them sound like they love each other to death. Which I know they don't. It's just a friendship and nothing more. that's how I like to see it. I think the reason why I liked this one better, is that there was more action. But I really do like The Unexpected Journey, because it's the first look you get of most of the "manish" characters. Do you think Tauriel is going to dies in There and Back Again? Hey, go check out my blog! I posted a review on The Desolation of Smaug. Leave a comment if you want, and tell all your other followers to leave a comment as well. Thanks.
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